【TSN】甲板十年祭 超长文原著分析(?)

【TSN】原著时间线虐点大放送(甲板十年 来重温吗)

 

https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1QT4y1u7yH/

 

  最近刚看完原著 The Accidental Billionaires,(将原著安利给英语老师你就可以按全班头)按照原著的时间线稍微剪了一点点,24章~29章的剧情(虽然因为索金大大把时间线压缩了好像没太剪出来orz)

 

  渣剪警告!字幕是自己配的所以有些地方翻译稍微改了一下(可能会不太恰当但我尽力了TAT)

 

  (其实不用去看视频(bushi),主要是想写一写自己读原著时的一些看法/分析)

  (超级主观!求轻喷)

  (超长流水账警告)

 

 

 

  原著的时间线是冻结账户(2004.07.28)→Peter Thiel 50万天使投资(2004.09)→叫Eduardo去签合同(2004.10)→百万会员夜(2004.12.03)→Ambush/摔电脑(2005.04.04)

 

  视频最开始的争吵内容在原著里是Eduardo给Mark的信里说的(认为自己作为公司的CFO被left out了),不得不说索金大大将线上矛盾转移到线下的改编真的非常厉害,时间线紧凑了很多,当然原著的“信件往来”更能解释为什么Eduardo会做出这么极端的举动,所谓“退一步越想越气”嘛

  打电话那段在原著里有一个比较长的时间跨度

  (They had it out on the phone a number of times——arguing like any two friends might, who were involved in something that had gotten bigger than either of them had really expected——but they'd come to a sort of dédente)

  放在电影里一个电话解决了Mark和Sean面对Eduardo冻结账户这个“不成熟”的行为的谴责+告知Eduardo天使投资的事+将Eduardo邀请到加州签文件三件事

  (索金大大的剧本也挺好看的,读的时候感觉每一句都是语音→_→)

  打电话这里在原著也是有小小小小糖的,Mark好几次说到要帮Eduardo平衡学业和事业,叫Eduardo不要那么操心(awwwww),两位也有很认真地在沟通和处理矛盾,维护他们的友(ai?)情,双箭头石锤了。

  

  虽然原著没有电影紧凑,但是原著的文笔超级神仙,安利安利安利!!(TMI:作者也是哈佛毕业的,“真·人均哈佛”),而且因为是多视角叙述,读者可以从Eduardo/Sean的角度看待他们的矛盾,也更容易看到事情的全貌(反思一开始cp脑说马总渣的我)。

  以前一直以为我会在看原著的时候非常崩溃+虐心,但其实没有,因为叙述很冷静平淡,可以让你跳出cp脑站在每个人的视角去分析和权衡每一个举动的利弊,所以到后面看到Ambush我已经完全能理解Mark的决定了。

 

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  • Facebook对于Eduardo来说究竟是什么?
     

 

Chapter 25(Sean视角):

 

  Sure, if Facebook didn't work out, Mark could always go back to school—but Sean doubted he ever would. He was going to continue his endless summer; and most likely, Dustin would stay on in California as well.

 

  But Eduardo? Well, from what Sean knew of the kid, Eduardo would never quit school. He'd already proven that he wasn't going to give up everything else for Facebook. That simply wasn't who he was. He had other interests. For instance, back at Harvard, from what Sean understood, he had the Phoenix. In New York, he'd had that internship, even though he'd quit in the first week.

 

  Eduardo would go back to school. But Mark Zuckerberg had found his place in the world.

 

  Facebook只是Eduardo众多爱好中的一小部分,Eduardo不可能为了Facebook放弃掉他剩下的东西。

 

Chapter 28(Eduardo视角):

 

  Tomorrow, hopefully, would be the beginning of things going back to normal between him and Mark—so that when he graduated, he could go right back to his old role as Mark's founding partner. The idea was pretty pleasing to him—because in a way, it meant he could extend his college life even further, because as big a company as Facebook became, Eduardo was pretty sure it would always feel like college to him. At Facebook, he could keep on postponing the real world, just like Mark was doing, maybe forever.

 

  Facebook对于Eduardo是一个“逃离现实生活”的借口,而他的“现实生活”存在在校园中,学业才是他生活的中心。

 

  Eduardo将Facebook的一切都看做自己“大学生活”的延伸。换句话说,他没有看到Facebook的潜力和它不可估量的未来,而是将其视作一个“dorm room project”,也因此在Facebook刚起步的时候就要开始create revenue,拉广告,但这一点被Mark视作很不“cool”的事情,Mark认为Facebook不该止步于此。


 

  这点认识上的差异最终让他们越走越远



 

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  • Eduardo究竟适不适合Facebook?
     

 


 

  我们再来看看Mark和Sean是怎么看待Facebook的。

 

  与Eduardo不同的是,Sean在第十七章刚出场的时候就认为Facebook是“Billion-dollarvaluation or bust”,传说中的“一眼看到未来市值”。他认为Facebook有着不可估量的未来,这点与Mark的观点是高度契合的。

 

  虽然Facebook的发展速度大大超出了Mark一开始的预料,但是他冷静迅速地caught on to the situation,并且积极面对,和Sean一起去拉Peter Thiel的天使投资。同样是面对一个始料未及的迅猛发展,Eduardo因为认知上的差异被left behind了。

 

  Sean作为Mark和Eduardo友谊的局外人,他在看一件与友谊相关的商业问题时,视角会更透彻、更不易被情绪所影响。

  因为Sean的叙述和分析特别通透,我对他转粉了(dbq以前一直觉得他是小三orz)。

Chapter 25(Sean视角):


Which left the question of Eduardo. Initially, Mark had decided, and Sean had agreed, Eduardo would still get his 30 percent. The intention was to include Eduardo and involve him as much as he wanted to be involved.


Going forward, people had to be given shares based on the amount of work any particular individual gave to the company. This wasn't some dorm-room project anymore, this was a real company, with a real investor.

  在Sean的叙述里,Mark有点too soft on Eduardo(Mark一开始执意要给Eduardo 30%的股份),并且认为Eduardo也应该像Sean/Dustin/Peter一样,干多少活拿多少股份。


  他觉得Eduardo在纽约拉广告商的事没有什么着落,却占着公司30%的股份。他在第二十五章解释了权利和权益的对等关系,也点明了Eduardo这种行为的错误所在,将稀释股份的操作合理化。


Chapter 25(Sean视角):


  Really, it was something Eduardo should understand. It wasn't about two kids in a dorm room anymore.


  And if he didn't get it? If he didn't understand? If he didn't want to understand?


  Well, in many ways, if Eduardo didn't get it—then in Sean's opinion, he didn't really care about Facebook the same way they did. Then he was no better than the Winklevoss twins, trying to grasp onto Mark' s ankles as he headed toward the heavens.


  Eduardo would have to understand. And if he didn't?


  Then, in the larger scheme of things, he didn't matter. He didn't exist.

 

  To Mark and Dustin and Sean, Facebook was everything. It was their lives.

 

  在Sean的视角,Eduardo是一个商人。作为一个商人,他早就应该明白这些规则。如果他不明白,那他会挡了Facebook的路。Facebook是Sean的第三次机会,因此他绝不允许任何人sabotage。Eduardo冻结账户的行为给他们造成了很大的威胁,Sean也绝不允许这样一个达摩克利斯之剑悬在Facebook的头上。

 

  “To Mark and Dustin and Sean, Facebook was everything”,对于Sean和Mark来说,Facebook是一切。这与Eduardo的理念大相径庭,刚刚前文有提到,Facebook对于Eduardo来说只是他众多爱好中的一个。

 

  在Sean的分析中,Eduardo手上有了太大的权力,而他本人没有实质性的作为,Sean因此直接得出结论:“我们不需要这个人。”

 

  他说“Eduardo would go back to school, but Mark has found his place in the world”,也算是一语道出了Eduardo身上背负了太多,注定会和Mark分道扬镳的原因。


 

(小彩蛋:电影里Mark电话里飙语速“Domino”那段原著里是Sean的分析)

 

 


 

 


  Sean认为Eduardo做的事情十分愚蠢,那么Eduardo真的没有意识到自己的问题吗?

 


  当然不是这样。

 


Chapter 27(Eduardo视角):

 

  It was a choice he had made. He had nobody to fault but himself. He could have moved out to California. He could have taken time off from school. 

 

  百万会员夜上,当他站在加州狂欢的人群中时,他意识到了自己对这帮年轻人仍停留在校园的认识是多么过时,也得出了结论,“不管怎么说,错误都出在自己身上。”他做出了选择,他就要承担选择的后果。

 

  Eduardo不傻,他已经发现了自己并不适合Facebook,只是不愿意在最后的时刻来临前承认罢了。




 

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  • Eduardo:被压力与梦想割裂的生活
     

 


 

  Eduardo的教育环境给了他极高的自尊心。

 

  当他发现Facebook的迅猛发展已经超出他预料的情况时,他的自尊心不允许他承认自己的判断出现了失误,于是他转而去批评Sean的存在,认为Mark忽略了自己和自己做出的努力,甚至选择了“冻结账户”这一极端的举动。

 

  当然,站在Eduardo的角度,Facebook吃他的用他的,却不让他参与任何决策,(甚至完全否认了他在拉广告商这件事上的付出,)这点确实足够让任何人崩溃。

 

  Eduardo本人也存在矛盾。

 

  一方面,Eduardo充分认可自己的能力,他足够自信;另一方面他也过分自卑,不敢露怯,因此在失误的情况下选择了用极端的方式来告诉别人,自己仍掌控着大局。

 

Chapter 27(Eduardo视角):

 

  Eduardo still lived in a dorm room. He walked to classes, through the now snow- covered Yard, lost in the cold shadows of Widener Library.

 

  It was a choice he had made. He had nobody to fault but himself. He could have moved out to California. He could have taken time off from school. Anyway, he was a senior, now, only five months to go before graduation. Then he could throw himself into Facebook like the rest, go right back to where he and Mark had started.

 

  Eduardo因为家族的原因,一直在努力地去证明自己,这一点在电影里有更多的强调。他想要得到父亲的认可(Phoenix和Facebook都是)。


  电影里,他在Facebook刚went online的时候对Mark说“You have no idea what it means to my father”;在打官司的时候说“Now father won't even look at me.”


  正因为这些东西都是他获得认可的凭证,他什么都不愿意放弃。Mark和Dustin可以放弃学业来到加州,但是Eduardo不行,于是他在令人头疼的毕业季和Facebook之间反复横跳。


  一方面是学业压力,另一方面又因为他远离Facebook的中心(where it's all happening),远离加州的人脉和资源,他无法对Facebook的情况做出最精确的判断。



  也同样是因为他急需认可,他不敢去做成功率不是100%的事情。他的教育环境和他背负的东西使他无法像Mark和Sean一样能无所顾忌地去做事。


  他需要在自己投入精力和金钱的事情上看到回报(比如在Facebook刚起步的时候就说要去找广告商),他需要对自己做的事情有绝对的把控。


  对于他来说,Harvard的学业便是这样一个他可以把控的、没有风险的投资,因此他将Harvard视作“home”,视作自己最后底牌,他也永远不会放弃这张底牌;对等地,Harvard也不会放弃他,Harvard会给Eduardo安全感。


  这种安全感在小说的各个地方都有体现。

  在百万会员夜上,Eduardo看到自己同学们在加州的生活在想的是“这里跟学校太不一样了”,“Eduardo still lived in a dorm room. He walked to classes, through the now snow-covered Yard, lost in the cold shadows of Widener Library”。



  Eduardo从来没有真正地离开过校园。

 


 

  在Eduardo经历了betrayal/ambush之后,他的第一个想法也是“He had to get out of there. Back to Harvard. Back to the campus, back home.” 

 

Chapter 29(Eduardo视角):

 

  To Mark Zuckerberg and Facebook, Eduardo Saverin no longer existed.

 

  Eduardo felt the walls closing in around him.

 

  He had to get out of there.

 

  Back to Harvard. Back to the campus, back home.




 

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  Mark和Sean看到了Facebook的无限未来,他们决意为它付出一切,因为他们是自由的,是无所顾忌的。

 


  Eduardo渴望认可,无法舍弃自己的底牌,却被“自由”的Mark所吸引。有时候我不禁想,或许他们从一开始认识时就注定了结局。


 

(小彩蛋:原著他俩正式认识是在加勒比之夜)



 

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  附赠:Ambush全过程(哭瞎)


 


(以上的分析完全主观!我超喜欢Wardo的,但只是想把Wardo也有做错的地方写出来,马总其实不渣TAT 他们那个时候才二十出头刚进入社会 谁年轻的时候不犯一点错呢orz)

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